This is a re-post of my review from Spidey-Dude.com which you can read here.
Story:
Disclaimer: This review was written before the conclusion of the Spider-Verse event. As such, points raised may later be addressed. Just go with the flow.
Mayday Parker is angry. She wants the other Spider-People to accompany her to the home-world of the Inheritors and rescue her baby brother-here referred to as 'Benny'. The others tell her it's suicide to go there, and the Spider-Totem of this world- Ben Parker- attempts to convince Mayday to stay in the safety his bunker, much the same way he did following his family's death, while the rest of his world was destroyed. Mayday calls Ben a coward and tells him her father would be ashamed of him.
Mayday runs off deep into the bunker, frustrated and angry at the others, telling herself they are imposters and fakes and that they don't understand what it takes to be a hero. Breaking down, Mayday begins crying and admits that the lose of her brother Benny is her own fault, that her parents are dead because of her.
Ben arrives and attempts to calm down Mayday but Mayday tells him that his family would be ashamed of him, that her father would be sickened to see him like this. The two fight it out with Ben admitting that he failed to act after the lose of his family and Mayday making the point that if they stay and do nothing, eventually the Inheritors will swarm in and kill them all.
After working together to fight off Mutant Spiders Ben tells Mayday that she needs to get her emotions under control and again offers her safe haven in his bunker if she'll forget about going after the Inheritors. Mayday tells Ben she can't live without her baby brother as he's all she has left. Mayday adds she hopes there is a world out there with a Mayday Parker untouched by the tragic events she's recently endured, as she will fight for them when she rescues Benny and kills Daemos.
Review:
I have to begin by saying welcome back, Tom, Ron and Sal! It's been too long, gentlemen! The classic team back doing a story with Spider-Girl would normally fill me with unadulterated joy. But under the current circumstances of the Spider-Verse event, I think there was always going to be some reservations going into this adventure.
I love Tom's classic writing style and his ability to pack so much into only ten pages is a testament to his skill. The mere fact that Mr Defalco is writing a very different Mayday from the one he worked so hard to develop for over a decade would make the adjustment jarring. Admittedly it is a different take on the character we see written here. Subtle and not so subtle narration refer to the way Slott characterized Mayday in Amazing Spider-Man #8 and the most recent Spider-Verse issues. A few examples including May calling herself 'Mayday' in her opening narration and referring to her brother has 'Benny' rather than 'Benjy' could be read as an implicit confirmation that this 'Mayday' isn't the Mayday the Spider-Girl crew created. There's also the 'With Great Power Must Also Come Great Responsibility' line which is something May would know. Alternatively this could simply be Tom and Ron attempting to maintain the narrative style put forward by Dan Slott. Or everyone is reading to much into all this, who knows?
A few positive points for me were the interactions between Mayday and Uncle Ben in this story. Essentially, the story is ham-strung by the fact that Ben Parker doesn't change his mind about staying in the bunker until Amazing Spider-Man #13 and Mayday (at the time of writing) has not gotten through her grief, anger and revenge arc, something Mr Slott is likely going to resolve in the conclusion of the story arc. So, what do Tom and Ron do? They USE that as a strength. The interactions allowed Ben and Mayday to call one another out on their actions and attitudes while also reinforcing their own opinions about how to address the threat at hand. Obviously, neither is 'right' but that's where I found the crux of this story because it's a differing of opinions, rather than a 'right and wrong' dilemma. Ben's desire to stay safe in his hide-y-hole and live with his regret is understandable, but so is Mayday's thirst for revenge and her own desire to save the last of her family. It's a great contrast.
Both Ron Frenz and Sal Busema are on fire for this Spider-Girl reunion! The inking is some of the best I've ever seen from Sal with a soft touch on the shading that really brought out Ron's strengths. Ron's layouts on this issue are astounding! Just take a look at page three of the story: Nine panels. Nine! It's utilizes the space in each panel to demonstrate Mayday's anger, sadness and guilt, using larger panels at the top of the page, progressively becoming smaller as the walls metaphorically close in on her. It's superb storytelling. There were a few coloring mistakes from Andrew Crossley but nothing major. I think his color palette is a great fit for this story. The reds are darker, the shadows have weight and the backgrounds are lit in such a way that you feel how depressing the confines of the bunker truly are.
Ron also put in some possible clues that we are not reading the MC2 Spider-Girl with her costume. For starters, her web-shooters are a different design to those seen in Amazing Spider-Girl. Her spider-emblem is slightly different, using the design from the original Spider-Girl series while the section of blue under the arms is reminiscent of the Amazing Spider-Girl costume design. If that wasn't enough, the eye-pieces on the mask are different to any design I've seen before, with the 'points' near the nose area pointing down as well as having a different size and shape. It's a distinct yet subtle costume shift.
Overall, I enjoyed this story on it's own merits but I feel it was a missed opportunity by Marvel to promote Spider-Girl through this Spider-Verse event. Once again, we are dealing with a very different take on the character when compared to what made her so unique and interesting in her own series'. That makes it hard for a new reader to appreciate what it is that fans enjoyed about May's adventures. That said, I believe Tom, Ron and Sal have all brought their 'A' game to this story and I walked away very happy for having read a good, solid story told well. I'll give it a straight 'A'.
Until the gang returns to write a new Spider-Girl series, I remain
frogoat
